A “Loopy Lines” Addition

Love is hard work.

music

However, the right/write/rite work can be wonderful and music can really heal.

Let me explain what this is all about.

Recently a friend had been feeling down about a broken relationship. She expressed herself on her FB page and friends all responded. Then one asked whether the words we had written could be put to music.

Now I can’t write music but I am pretty good with words so I wrote the following and was rewarded by hearing that my friend’s mood was relieved somewhat by the words that expressed her feelings and so here below I have set the words.

If anyone out there reading this is a musical person and can create a tune with it let me know. Then perhaps we can create something to help cheer and heal others when they also feel down-hearted.

Needs a title though – would love your comments/opinions too please.

CHORUS??
Intelligence of understanding, along with true compassion
Create a depth of feeling that can easily lead to passion.
Selflessness and generosity take us to great heights
Leading us along the path that brings us to the light

VERSES??
When you’re “in the moment” your feelings may relate
Statements of eternal love, which later just add weight
To feelings of oppression, when you realise what was true,
Was a truth only in the moment, and it really isn’t you.

Emotions often lead you to an ecstasy of mind:
You pledge love, make commitments, which later on you find
Were all just lies, not really truth, except when in “that space”
So now you have to work really hard to discover your true place.

Tested by your strength of mind and real concern for others too,
If you care enough, respect them and be honest, for it’s true
That concern for yourself can cause you to be kind
But you lose self-respect when you lie, and end up in a bind.

If you can use your judgement to select a “proper” mate
A sense of trust develops that guides us to our fate,
By understanding other’s needs, being present in their whole
A deeper love develops which will imprint on your soul.

Loopy
(Feb 2013)

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About travell1ngthroughl1fe

I am a fun-loving person who goes with the flow and travels through life most of the time though sometimes I have to be responsible when others try to get me on their track! Most of the time though people tell me I am barking mad! hahahaha! Life is short but oh so sweet so I believe in looking out for the bright side of life and I can always find a positive in everything! Half-empty glasses are not for me. Negativity is an ill I want to cure in everyone. Only after you heal your own soul can you help to really heal the world. So when you need help, ask for it and where it is offered, gratefully accept it as a gift.
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